Can You Rate My Story Plz?
Question by Monica: Can you rate my story plz?
The house was just a beautiful as she expected it to be. It loomed in front of the crystal river and snow glistened on the tree branches. Her brand new heels clacked against the pavement as they walked towards the stained double doors. Inside the house was like an imperial hotel. The interior were oak and mahogany. She couldn’t keep her eyes off of the grand staircase and crystal chandelier hanging above the cathedral ceiling. She didn’t understand why he hadn’t invited her over before.
“Let’s chill in my room.” suggested Andy, smiling at Nicole.
“Cool with me.” she shrugged, grabbing Carter’s hand.
They walked down the long hallway where flowers and pots hang from the ceiling above the accented rug. A grandfather clock displayed at the end of the hallway overlooking the view. Famous portraits ornamented the beautifully crafted walls as Nicole walked past it. She loved paintings. She was going to have fun at his house.
When they reached his room, Andy hopped onto his computer and started checking his Facebook. While he was doing Nicole and Holly sat on his bed. Nicole noticed the white schnauzer sleeping soundly next to it.
“Aww…he’s so cute!” she crooned, reaching over to pet him.
“He sure is.” Andy laughed, not taking his eyes off of the screen. “I’m ’bout to get something to drink. Anyone want one?”
“I think we all do.” chuckled Carter.
“I second that.” agreed Holly. “Nicole do you want one?”
“Nah, I already had something to drink.” Nicole said. “Thanks, anyway.”
“No problem.” nodded Andy. “You can check your facebook if you want to.”
“Thanks.” she grinned. “Don’t mind if I do.”
Holly gave her a friendly smile before walking out of the room. She couldn’t believe she was in the presence of Holly. The girl that everyone wanted to be friends with. She was like an angel. All of her friends were. They all seemed elegant and poised. No one saw them as average high-schoolers. They were more than that. And Nicole was glad she was going to be apart of that.
She walked over to Andy’s computer desk and signed out of his login. Just when she was about to type in her own email address, Carter’s email address popped up in the box. Curious, she clicked on the password box. Six black dots appeared. Feeling excited, she clicked on the login button. As soon as she entered his Facebook page, she saw dozens of comments on his page. Most of them were from Savannah.
Carter Atkins: Hey, why didn’t you say hi to me yesterday :(
Savannah Ripley: Oops, sorry. I was in a hurry to get to class. I’ll say hi next time :)
Carter Atkins: You better ;)
Savannah Ripley: haha very funny. Do you wanna do something today?
Carter Atkins: Well, I’m hangin out with my friends. How bout tomorrw?
Savannah Ripley: Aww…you know I don’t like doing stuff on Sundays. Maybe next weekend?
Carter Atkins: Count on it.
Nicole didn’t believe it. He was still talking to his ex-girlfriend. Savannah Ripley. Savannah, Savannah, Savannah. That was all she heard in that damn school. It was all about Savannah. She wasn’t that great anyway. Nicole didn’t even know the girl, but she disgusted her. She didn’t fit in with the popular kids. She had no idea why her and Holly were even best friends. She should have been best friends with Holly and the other girls. Clicking on Savannah’s profile, she saw several conversations between her and Andy. Now she was winning over the friendship of her old best friend? This didn’t seem right. Was that why Andy hadn’t talked to her a lot since July? Because of Savannah? Nicole was seething.
Then a devilish smile crept on her face.
Let’s see how much Carter will like Miss Homecoming Queen after she deletes his comments.
With that, she went back to Carter’s page and deleted every conversation they had between each other.
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